Tender Trap Page 1

So, this is sort of a test. I'm thinking about turning my series into a comic format, but I can't draw too well and really am scared of screwing up my story. As you can clearly see, I'm no professional, I am self-taught, ongoing learner.

I stink at coloring and backgrounds, but I'm thinking, maybe I could learn as I go? But I dunno. Really need some feedback and opinions on this. The story is posted on Fanfiction dot net under my same name, Sleepingseeker. Chapters one and two are on here, as well.

OKAY I'M GOING FOR IT... HERE's THE LINK TO PAGE 2: fav.me/d6gw6i9